新人拜坛,望求高手指点_顺道奉送策划案

12free

Hello guys, I am new here.

I will release two of my designs. Attached please find the documents. And please just give me any advices!

Thank you for your reading^^ [em20]

饕餮

GUYS====同性恋？？？？？？？？？

12free

This is another design.
I came up with it 10 months age. Just old things!!!

12free

饕餮: Re:New coming!! Please give me some advice^^

GUYS====？？？？？？？？？

Guys==Everybody
Gay==同性恋 [em7]

lyDASHsBOK

二楼的同学该回去补英语了。

Guys是大家的意思

Gay才是同性恋（男）

饕餮

恩。。。。。。。。。。。汗！！！打高中以后就没学过英语啦。。。。对不起人民。

12free

I am sorry guys. I can't input Chinese in my system. So....
Sorry>_<

Wind_Force

I will release two of my designs. Attached please find the documents. And please just give me any advices!

就看这句话吧:
1.I will release two of my designs. 这个of在这里,你觉得合适吗?或者退一步,你读着觉得拗口吗?
2.Attached please find the documents. 应该将attached置后,作为documents的后置定语.
3.And please just give me any advices! 你在尝试使用较委婉的语气,这很好,但请注意一点基本语法.please give some advices.就可以了,不要画蛇添足.还有any advices是不对的.

12free

Thank you for your opinion, I will pay more attention.^^

But the point is the design, not the language^^

gthief

8楼的，楼主的英语都没什么问题哦，可以说也很地道。

大概浏览了一下楼主的东西，比较有条理，赞一个！如果我是负责人的话，就喜欢像楼主这样的新人，呵呵。